Morena Vihann, thank you for sharing your Strange New Creature slide on your blog. On slide 2 you have listed some great nouns and verbs. I also really like the word you used to describe how the humans were feeling in your sick sentence. I too think that I might have felt anxious. Just a reminder that adjectives will describe the nouns. So what words would you use to describe the bug? Eg - enormous, fluffy, black, yellowy. Adverbs describe the verbs. For example - how would you describe how they are bending? Carefully, cautiously, slowly. Could you please have another look at your adjectives and adverbs.
Morena Vihann, thank you for sharing your Strange New Creature slide on your blog. On slide 2 you have listed some great nouns and verbs. I also really like the word you used to describe how the humans were feeling in your sick sentence. I too think that I might have felt anxious. Just a reminder that adjectives will describe the nouns. So what words would you use to describe the bug? Eg - enormous, fluffy, black, yellowy. Adverbs describe the verbs. For example - how would you describe how they are bending? Carefully, cautiously, slowly. Could you please have another look at your adjectives and adverbs.
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