Kia Ora This is my past and future volcano slide(13th september)There is a haiku i made so please try to figure it out.Do you like lockdown?.If Not Stay Safe In Your Bubble.
Kia Ora Vihann, congratulations on your volcano haiku poem. I particularly like the last line, it really hits the mark about what happens when volcanoes erupt. Great work!
Kia ora Vihaan, thank you for sharing your poem with us. You have done well to get the syllable count correct. Do you enjoy writing poetry or prefer story writing? Kia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)
Kia ora Vihann, thank you for sharing your poetry slide on your blog. The first page is very eye catching, all of the oranges and yellows against a dark background make the letters stand out and give a great lava effect. I too really like your haiku. Well done on getting the number of syllables in each line correct. using the clues in your poem, I think that your haiku is about a lava flow eruption. Am I correct?
Kia Ora Vihann, congratulations on your volcano haiku poem. I particularly like the last line, it really hits the mark about what happens when volcanoes erupt. Great work!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Vihaan, thank you for sharing your poem with us. You have done well to get the syllable count correct. Do you enjoy writing poetry or prefer story writing?
ReplyDeleteKia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)
Kia ora Vihann, thank you for sharing your poetry slide on your blog. The first page is very eye catching, all of the oranges and yellows against a dark background make the letters stand out and give a great lava effect.
ReplyDeleteI too really like your haiku. Well done on getting the number of syllables in each line correct. using the clues in your poem, I think that your haiku is about a lava flow eruption. Am I correct?