Kia Orana bloggers this is my hundred word story about the present film i did in writing.It took long but if you dont add 'and' you will make it shorter
In the evening Jacob was playing Fortnite. Then his mum came in with a present. She placed the present in front of Jacob..”How about you open the present I got you” Jacobs mum said as she opened the blinds.”Ok”.”She got a call so she picked the phone and went upstairs.Jacob opened the present and a puppy jumped out.He said the puppy was cool until he saw that the puppy was missing a leg. He threw the puppy on the ground and he tried to play. The puppy found a red ball so they played fetch.
Have you ever had to write 100 words story?.
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Vihaan
Kia ora Vihaan
ReplyDeleteyour hundred word story is really descriptive and a lot like like the video.
How hard was it to write a hundred?
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Kia ora Leo
DeleteIt was very hard because when I was trying to make it short and with detail,It was annoying I was one letter extra
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vihaan
Kia Ora Vihaan you have a great writing of only a hundred words I did something like that and if you want to see it see my blog.blog you later.
ReplyDeleteHi Vihaan. Maybe you could make the picture so that it is the whole picture instead of just half of it. And maybe you could write a bit more about how the dog found the red ball and how the dog convinced the boy to play fetch.
ReplyDeleteHow long did it take for you to make the 100 word story?
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