My Ideal park

Kia ora Bloggers.Hope you guys are still doing well in you bubble.I've created my own ideal park using gooogle drawing,(I know the gariffe is bad).

 

Do you think my ideal park is nice? blog you later

Do all volcanoes look the same?(Slide)

Kia ora bloggers hope your doing well in you little bubble.This is my slide about Do all Volcanoes look the same?.This is some work i've beem working on for 2 days.It was pretty easy beacause the storys where actuly intresting

 

Did you do A Do all Volcanoes look the same slide?Blog you later

My Auckland and beyond slide

Kia ora this is my Auckland and beyond slide i did while lockdown

  did you have to do a Auckland and beyond slide? Blog you later Vihaan

My Coin Operated six senteces

Kia ora Bloggrs,For this blog post I had to watch the short clip called coin operated then write six sentences.

&.In writing we have been learning to fix up sick sentences to make then less sick.How do you think I can improve my senteces? Blog you later Vihaan

My present slide

Kia Orana bloggers this is my hundred word story about the present film i did in writing.It took long but if you dont add 'and' you will make it shorter 

Now write a 100 word story  

In the evening Jacob was playing Fortnite. Then his mum came in with a present. She placed the present in front of Jacob..”How about you open the present I got you” Jacobs mum said as she opened the blinds.”Ok”.”She got a call so she picked the phone and went upstairs.Jacob opened the present and a puppy jumped out.He said the puppy was cool until he saw that the puppy was missing a leg. He threw the puppy on the ground and he tried to play. The puppy found a red ball so they played fetch.

Have you ever had to write 100 words story?.

blog you later 

     Vihaan

My what is a quality blog comment

 

Kia ora bloggers this is my What is a Quality blog comment i did in cyber smart.Do you have a quality comment on your blog? blog you later vihaan